He vs. You

He loves me, you don’t

He takes enough care of me, you don’t

He isn’t looking for fun, you are

He isn’t playing on me, you are

He trusts me, you change me to a not trustworthy one..

He has faith in me, you can make me lose my faith..

He gives me love and understanding, you offer me fire

He doesn’t care for too-detail things, but that’s certainly better than just caring for my outside look

Not all the times with him are enjoyable, but times spent with you can make my mind becomes too wild..!

You can easily make me miss you, but that won’t change the true sincerity I feel from him..

You can sometimes see me burned, but not as free as he can…

I can lose control in front of you at times, while I don’t need to control myself in front of him

I feel not much more than lust for you, while there’s deeper love and sacrifice for him

He didn’t come before you, but he gives me more. Maybe the most important is that he also takes care of my heart.

He has known too much about me, that I don’t need to hide anymore

I’ll break my own heart if I disappoint him

I’d have fooled myself to do so…

4 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Masenchipz  |  November 29, 2008 at 9:19 pm

    and soo?

    Reply
  • 2. poet  |  March 2, 2009 at 10:10 am

    hohohohoho….

    so nice poem…

    I hope u’ll never dissapointed again…

    Reply
  • 3. Putra  |  May 4, 2009 at 11:01 am

    Hi Yasinta…Salam kenal yach.

    Ini kunjungan balik…dari blog sy putracenter.wordpress.com

    tq dah comment di blog putra.

    Sepertinya anda pintar membuat puisi…menarik sekali…pertanyaannya siapa he and you ??

    good work..and happy monday ^_^

    Reply
  • 4. Fvaeryhst Mouzakki  |  October 9, 2009 at 9:51 am

    puisina org yg lg dilema cinta y~

    hmmm~

    (~_~)
    =oo=

    Reply

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